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Bethany K

Bethany King

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  1. March 7, 2011 at 2:14 pm

    This is really good, you have included alot of relevent information and have explain everything very efficiently. You have also included advantages and disadvantages of both email and mobile phones. The examples you have used of each are both well described. this should be a distinction.

  2. Fiona Dempsey
    May 18, 2011 at 12:02 pm

    This is very informing and interesting. It is written very well and it is very formal. You used many great words too. However, would you be able to expand on the drawbacks of technology? You seem to have written more advantages.

    Well done.

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