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  1. Adammmmmmmm
    March 7, 2011 at 10:34 pm

    I would say this is well on the way to being a distinction once you have all the other forms of communication covered.

    The only thing I would add is an ‘overall’ section beneath the advantages and disadvantages to say if overall it is a good or poor form of business communication.

  2. andrew
    March 8, 2011 at 10:55 am

    i think that the work is currently at a pass but only becasue the work isnt finsihed. the work that has been done has good detail and the printscreens make the work look more professional, and when the work is complete if its at the same standard it will get a distinction.

  3. NathanH
    March 8, 2011 at 10:56 am

    I would have to agree withy adam & have an overall section, however i havnt done that myself so i would include it in future to improve.

  4. March 9, 2011 at 9:55 am

    I think you are currently are at a merit due to the work not being fully complete. I would add on the end about what you think about the communication and if it is good or not

  5. Danielle McCloud
    May 18, 2011 at 12:00 pm

    I Agree that she should of finished it because it was a very good piece of work πŸ™‚ But You Should Of Put You Think ABout All Of The Communication!

  6. Georgia Gardner
    May 24, 2011 at 9:14 am

    this website was very well designed but will be better when finished. it definaitly puts your point across to other pupils you want to show.

  7. Beth Claxton
    May 24, 2011 at 9:17 am

    I agree with Dannielle, i think this peice of work should be finished as it is verry good. I also like the design and layout of this peice of work as it is clever and funky! πŸ™‚

  8. Alice Midgley
    May 24, 2011 at 9:21 am

    I think this is a really good piece of work and you can tell you have worked hard but i think you should put how you think of the situation and how you feel not just how others feel:)But maybe for future reference you should make it a bit smaller so it`s easier to read πŸ™‚

  9. Izzy Platt
    May 24, 2011 at 9:22 am

    I think this a good piece of work and you must have put a lot of effort into it but I think you should make your work shorter and more understandable for younger people to read because at the moment it’s quite long and can get quite complicated. Altogether I think you have made a very good, informatics piece of work! πŸ™‚

  10. Izzy Platt
    May 24, 2011 at 9:23 am

    I think this a good piece of work and you must have put a lot of effort into it but I think you should make your work shorter and more understandable for younger people to read because at the moment it’s quite long and can get quite complicated. Altogether I think you have made a very good, informatics piece of work! πŸ™‚

  11. Izzy Platt
    May 24, 2011 at 9:23 am

    Sorry I did’nt mean to post that comment above twice ^^^^

  12. Laura Bewsher
    May 24, 2011 at 9:24 am

    i use msn to talk to my friends from leeds and from other countrys. without i wouldnt be able to stay intouch.

  13. eloise livsey
    May 24, 2011 at 9:26 am

    I think it is very well presented and lots of information but was quite long. You covered lots of good points. It tells you lot about communication too. πŸ™‚

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